Documentary Evaluation Essay
Posted by tarynnhs11 on May 22, 2009
With our film, we wanted to inform, persuade, and effect change. We had a lot of good information, and we used a lot of statistics to inform our audiences. We had information that was accurate, and was proven by experts. For example, 100 cows die every day in India because of plastic bags that are left lying around. Or that each American household uses approximately 350 gallons of water a day, and 25%of it ends up being wasted in our toilets. We also persuaded well. We found out in our interviews that a lot of people do actually care about the environment, and a lot of them don’t understand why people just don’t even try. In one of our expert interviews, Tara Fridhandler said that recycling is so easy, and if we started putting recycling bins all over, as much as we do with trashcans, she thinks that people will realize that it doesn’t take very much effort. I think that people will appreciate the fact that our class took so much time and effort to try and make a difference in the world. Our goal was to try and make a change.
I think some of the things that work in this film are that we had updated information, we had experts give their opinions on the subject, and we made it interesting with music, still images, and the visual metaphors. We made it fun and easy to watch, and I think that will help a lot with getting people to listen, and think about how they can help the environment. We also did a good job with the editing and using the interviews correctly. We cited everything appropriately, and had good credits at the end. I liked how the interviews flowed together and made sense. For example, when we wrote the question and then just showed the interviewee’s answer
Some of the things that would work better in the film are getting steadier camera shots. The camera shots were good for the most part, but a lot of parts were shaky and used the wrong technique at the wrong time. For example, when one of the groups was doing an expert interview, they did a close up when, in my opinion, it was unnecessary. Another time was when doing the street interviews, they gave the interviewee too much headroom, and you could only see them from the chin up. The narration and timing was another thing we could work on. In one scene, we were showing a quote, and the narrator was reading the quote, but the timing was way off and the talking cut into another scene in the background of an interview. Lighting is another thing we could work on. At Creve Coeur Lake, there were some interviews that had very poor lighting, and you couldn’t even see their faces. One more thing we could have done better is using still images that didn’t have the name of the website we got it from on the bottom of the photo. There are plenty of pictures on the internet to choose from and it would have looked more professional if we removed those, or got better images. The intro was very bad, in my opinion. I think we should have taken more time on it, and more people should have participated in it.
I learned many things in this project. I learned more about sustainable living in this class than I have in science class. I learned about different camera shots and when to use them, I liked the videos we watched about student documentaries. I think that really helped us. I learned many ways to research things, and all the different types of search engines there are. I have blogged before, but nothing like this. This project helped me a lot with working well with others and organizing things well. I learned so much about sustainable living, and I will definitely start recycling and caring more about the way we live. I also learned how to cut and edit video, and use the Premier software.
I think I will use these lessons in the future. I understand now how important it is to care about the environment. Hopefully others that see our film will feel the same way that I do. I’m not going to care just because someone tells me to or just because I can. I’m going to care because I need to. If we are going keep living on the Earth then we need to start somewhere in protecting it. I will use all of the lessons we have learned in the future.
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